To my husband
You are my love and my heart beats when I saw you
My soul need you
The eye longs for the consideration of you
The body requests hugs
They were always to Atptad? close
I don’t want to live without you
Attachment mercy on my heart
And lacrimal? descending
Let me tell you the thirst for your lips
I want you for me alone
This is good, but it need some changes
Would you like me to edit it ?
Please reply in English
And delighted to read an objective
Sincere greetings
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ξ❤Ξ مستشارهΞ❤Ξ
 Dear Old sure others want
And delighted to read an objective Sincere greetings |
Dear I didn’t understand
What do you mean ?
Anyway I will correct the mistakes
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ξ❤Ξ مستشارهΞ❤Ξ
To my husband
You are my love and my heart beating |
You are my love and my heart beats when I saw you
My soul need you
The eye longs for the consideration of you
The body requests hugs
They were always to Atptad? close
I don’t want to live without you
Attachment mercy on my heart
And lacrimal? descending
Let me tell you the thirst for your lips
I want you for me alone
Dear you can see the changes in the red color
But I didn’t understand some words
Keep on dear and practise , surley your writing will improve 
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة coolgurl
You are my love and my heart beats when I saw you
My soul need you The eye longs for the consideration of you The body requests hugs They were always to Atptad? close I don’t want to live without you Attachment mercy on my heart And lacrimal? descending Let me tell you the thirst for your lips I want you for me alone Dear you can see the changes in the red color But I didn’t understand some words Keep on dear and practise , surley your writing will improve |
Modified Thank you very much
